读后续写Recently divorced(离婚），I was in my 20s,had no job and was on my way downtown to the employment of

The doorbell suddenly rang and Peggy ran swiftly to answer it,calling that it must be Santa Claus.Then I heard a man talking heartily to her,so I went to the door.He was a deliver man.and his arms were full of parcels."This is a mistake,"I said,but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me.When he had gone I could only stare at the boxes.Peggy and I sat on the floor and opened them.A huge doll.Gloves.Candy.A beautiful leather purse.Incredible! I looked for the name of the sender.It was the lady.
Our dinner that night was the most delicious I had ever eaten.I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my purse and no job.My child and I ate and laughed together in happiness.We decorated the small Christmas tree with the gifts that we received Then Peggy fell asleep.Looking at her,I felt a sweet peace flooding me.I had some hope again.
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本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲述了作者20几岁时离婚后发生的两件事情，第一件事情是，作者坐车捡到一把漂亮的伞，并把伞还给物主；第二件事情是，圣诞节来临，生活拮据的作者和女儿将要过一个寒酸的圣诞节，这让作者感到心碎。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：门铃突然响了，Peggy急忙跑去开门，并大声说这一定是圣诞老人。所以应该写Peggy开门后的所见所闻以及接下来发生的事情，一位快递员上门，送来包裹，作者和女儿打开包裹，发现是丢雨伞的女士送的。第二段开头是：那天晚上的晚餐是我吃过的最美味的晚餐。本段应该写为何这是作者最美味的晚餐和最好的一个圣诞节，作者收到别人的礼物，感到幸福开心，困难的生活又有了希望。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：be full of，stare at，fall asleep等高级词汇；现在分词作状语…calling that it must be Santa Claus.,省略关系代词that的定语从句Our dinner that night was the most delicious I had ever eaten.，that引导定语从句We decorated the small Christmas tree with the gifts that we received 等高级句式。