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书面表达假定你是李华,你的家人想邀请你校的英国交换生Peter到你家聚餐。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.表明意图;

英语作文范文 08-11

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请英国交换生Peter到家聚餐。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式结构。
要求:1.表明意图,提出邀请。(invite to dinner)
2.阐述邀请的原因(as a friend; have a talk with brother with his English)
3.告知时间、地点和乘车方式。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
on behalf of ; invite sb. to do;  not only…but also; have some difficulty in…;be convenient for sb. ; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. On behalf of my family and myself, I'd like to invite you to have dinner with us.
2. I invite you not only because we are good friends and I want to treat you to dinner but also because my brother has some difficulty in learning English.
3. If it is convenient for you, please come to my home at 6 0'clock this Sunday afternoon.
4. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表并列补充关系:What is more Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
2.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
1) 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:
I invite you not only because we are good friends and I want to treat you to dinner but also because my brother has some difficulty in learning English, which upsets him very much.
这句话中既包含了并列结构not only… but also, 又使用了非限制性定语从句;which upsets him very much。
You can take the No. 666 bus at the west gate of our school and get off at Daxing Road, where I will pick you up.本句中含有where 引导的非限制定语从句:where I will pick you up
2) 使用了一些固定词组,如on behalf of ; invite sb. to do; have some difficulty in…; be convenient for sb. ; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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