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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写的词数应为150左右。 Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly o

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One day, 3, 000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eye. Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon, with a piece of paper at the end of the string, wrapped in plastic. Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines to his wife Donna. She was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, Donna decided to help Desiree. The couple went to buy a birthday card and a book of The Little Mermaid, and then she began to write a letter to Desiree.
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Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived. Looking at the unfamiliar return address, Desiree’s mother was confused. Suddenly an idea struck her: the balloon! She opened the parcel and found a card with “For a Dear Daughter”. Her heart raced. She rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. “It’s from Daddy!” Desiree jumped with joy, asking her mother to read it for her. “Happy birthday, my little angel!” Her mother began. A big tear began to trickle down Desiree’s cheek.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知,4岁的小女孩Desiree 9个月前失去了父亲,她没有适应父亲的去世,认为父亲在工作,在父亲生日那天,她想给父亲寄卡片,母亲带她去商店买了气球,写了一封信绑在气球上,自从放飞了气球,她每天都问妈妈爸爸收到了没,直到几个星期后她不问了。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:一天,3000英里外,韦德正在猎鸭子,突然灌木丛中有什么东西引起了他的注意。本段应该写韦德出于好奇去查看,发现了这个银色气球和上面的信,他把信带回家,他的妻子看了信的内容,深受感动,决定帮助Desiree,回信给Desiree。第二段开头是:Desiree的五岁生日到了,下午晚些时候,一个包裹送来了。本段应该写Desiree的妈妈拿着包裹,立马想到了这个包裹可能与气球有关,打开包裹后,发现是给女儿Desiree的,她立马给女儿看,Desiree看了信后,非常开心和感动。
注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右,按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:at the end of,decide to do sth.,rush to,trickle down等高级词汇;Taking it home和Looking at the unfamiliar return address非谓语动词短语,with a piece of paper at the end of the string和With tears in her eyes是with复合结构等高级句式。
 
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