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书面表达假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。

英语作文范文 08-15
书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。
【写作要求】
1.结合实际,可适当发挥,使内容充实、行文连贯;
2.120词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua,president of the Student Union.I'm honored to give a talk here.The summer vacation is drawing near.I'd like to remind you it is important_________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
【答案】I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. I'm honored to give a talk here. The summer vacation is drawing near: I'd like to remind you it is important to stick to a healthy lifestyle. Here are some tips for you.
Firstly, please make sure you don't abandon the good habit of keeping early hours. Early risers tend to be healthier and achieve more. Moreover, a balanced diet is beneficial to health. It is suggested that we never skip meals. Nor should we allow ourselves to be addicted to junk food. Always make conscious choices when it comes to food because we are, to some extent, what we eat. Finally, we should limit the time we spend on screen-based activities and take an active part in sports instead.
Follow the tips above, and you will live a fulling and healthy life. Wish you happiness in the coming summer vacation!
Thank vou for vour listening!
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。
【详解】假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。分析可知,应该以第一人称为主,一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。It is suggested that we never skip meals.主语从句的运用。Nor should we allow ourselves to be addicted to junk food.部分倒装的运用。
 
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