1. 表达问候及思念之情;
2. 介绍新教学楼的情况;
3. 欢迎他前来参观我们的新教学楼。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
get along/ be delighted to do sth/ tell sb sth/ introduce sth to sb/ be equipped with/ be located in/ be decorated with/ welcome sb to/ be determined to do sth/ show sb around
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to receive your letter. How are you getting along these days? I miss you very much.
2. It’s delightful for us to move into a new teaching building.
3. Located in the south of the school, our teaching building has 5 floors.
4. Our classroom which is equipped with advanced teaching equipment is spacious and bright.
5. We feel so pleased that we decorate it with beautiful flowers, making it a sea of flowers.
6. It is the comfortable environment where we sit that makes me determined to study hard., so I firmly believe that we can spend an unforgettable school life.
7. Welcome to visit our new teaching building. I’m looking forward to your coming.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:Our classroom which is equipped with advanced teaching equipment is spacious and bright.句中which引导定语从句;It is the comfortable environment where we sit that makes me determined to study hard, so I firmly believe that we can spend an unforgettable school life.使用了强调句型it is +强调部分+ that,where引导定语从句,that引导宾语从句。这些从句和句式的使用为文章增色添彩。