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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Whether we notice it or not, our child is a little reflection

英语作文范文 04-13

I was puzzled because my daughter’s new friend looked so familiar. But I was sure that I had never met Jo before. She told me that her family just moved from Los Angeles, which puzzled me even more because I had never been to Los Angeles and we had no relatives living in Los Angeles, either. I convinced myself that it was only my imagination. The two girls got on very well and they giggled from time to time. I watched them play and felt so happy for my daughter from the bottom of my heart.
Two hours passed really quickly, and there was a knock on the door. It was Jo’s mom coming to pick her up later that afternoon. On seeing her face, I was shocked. “Judy!” she cried. “It’s me, Susan!” We embraced each other. It turned out that her father’s company sent his father to Los Angeles before they settled in Florida. She tried calling me later but we had moved. The two little girls were happy to see their mothers became good friends at once before we told them our story, with happy tears rolling down our cheeks.
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知,作者的女儿Jane想要邀请自己的朋友来家里,这让作者想起了自己童年时的好朋友Susan,回忆了当初和Susan相处的事情,后来因为作者搬家就没能再和Susan见面。第二天Jane把新朋友带回家,小女孩说自己叫Jo,她妈妈两个小时后来接她。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:我很困惑,因为我女儿的新朋友看起来很面熟。所以后文应该是讲述作者对于觉得Jo面熟的困惑,以及看到Jo和Jane两个女孩相处得很好,作者从心底里为女儿感到高兴。
第二段开头是:两个小时过得真快,有人敲门。本段应该写Jo的妈妈来接Jo,作者发现正是Susan,Susan曾经联系过作者,但作者一家已经搬走了。两个小女孩也很为他们高兴,Susan和作者都留下了快乐的泪水。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:puzzle sb.;convince oneself that;imagination;get on very well;turn out等高级词汇;She told me that her family just moved from Los Angeles, which puzzled me even more because I had never been to Los Angeles and we had no relatives living in Los Angeles, either.运用宾语从句和非限制性定语从句;The two little girls were happy to see their mothers became good friends at once before we told them our story, with happy tears rolling down our cheeks.运用时间状语从句等高级句式。
 
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