书面表达（25分）
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班级， 感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点给他写封信。
1.帮他分析原因；
2.给他提出建议；
3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
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【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. I suppose that you haven’t found your feet in your class yet. I want to give some advice/suggestions on how to adapt yourself to the new class.
To start with, you might as well take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. It’s even better if you could learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Also, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Let’s stay in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.帮他分析原因；2.给他提出建议；3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态以一般过去时为主。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，帮他分析原因；第二段，给他提出建议；陈述你帮助他的具体打算。第三段，表达希望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: likes , dislikes, recommend, different, friendly, have trouble in communicating with others, adapt yourself to the new class, take an active part in, listen to other people’s views, introduce you to others.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others. I suppose that you haven’t found your feet in your class yet. It’s even better if you could learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Also, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:To start with, at the same time, Also. Last but not least.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如宾语从句I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others. I suppose that you haven’t found your feet in your class yet. Also, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.条件状语从句It’s even better if you could learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班级， 感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点给他写封信。
1.帮他分析原因；
2.给他提出建议；
3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
__________________________________
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. I suppose that you haven’t found your feet in your class yet. I want to give some advice/suggestions on how to adapt yourself to the new class.
To start with, you might as well take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. It’s even better if you could learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Also, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Let’s stay in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.帮他分析原因；2.给他提出建议；3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态以一般过去时为主。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，帮他分析原因；第二段，给他提出建议；陈述你帮助他的具体打算。第三段，表达希望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: likes , dislikes, recommend, different, friendly, have trouble in communicating with others, adapt yourself to the new class, take an active part in, listen to other people’s views, introduce you to others.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others. I suppose that you haven’t found your feet in your class yet. It’s even better if you could learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Also, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:To start with, at the same time, Also. Last but not least.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如宾语从句I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others. I suppose that you haven’t found your feet in your class yet. Also, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.条件状语从句It’s even better if you could learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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