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书面表达假如你是中学生李华,你的外教John想推荐你去参加一次以野生动物保护为主题的英语演讲比赛,但是最近你母亲生病了,需要你照顾,

英语作文范文 08-04

【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
      总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表示感谢
      2.拒绝推荐 
      3.说明理由
      4.推荐好友参加
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Great opportunity; take part in; English speech competition; attend; be ill; take care of; in one’s spare time; prepare for; I strongly recommend; the most suitable; participate in; be good at; speak fluent English; devote to; rich experience of animal protection ; perfect spoken English; enable sb. to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. Thank you very much for your recommendation. 
2. It’s a great opportunity to take part in the English speech competition.
3. I'm afraid that I can't attend it .
4. My mother has been ill for several days.
5. I have to take care of her in my spare time, so I don't have enough time to prepare for the speech competition.
6. I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming, who I think is the most suitable person to participate in this competition.
7. He is good at English and speaks fluent English. Besides, he is a member of the wild- animal protection club and devotes much time to caring animals.
8. I'm sure his rich experience of animal protection and perfect spoken English will enable him to achieve success.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last.
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including.
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result .
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming, who I think is the most suitable person to participate in this competition.中who引导非限制性定语从句。作者还使用了形式主语。例如:It’s a great opportunity to take part in the English speech competition.中,it是形式主语,真正的主语是动词不定式。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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