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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 While 1 was sitting in the living room, the days

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Paragraph 1: When speed failed her, she used her wisdom. The first trick was that if I was about to get away, she would yell,” Stop! Thief! ”. Her words brought the whole neighbors out against me. There were some strangers trying to catch me and tackle me, and I cried, “I'm not a thief! I 'm her son!” The second trick was to pretend to fall down while she was running to grab me. She wore a pair of shoes with high heels. Suddenly, she shouted, "Help.” And I ran back without hesitation and her trick worked again. Several years later, something unlucky happened.
Paragraph 2: If given a chance, I would let my mom run in front of me. After graduating from college, I went to Beijing to develop my business. And I couldn't come back home frequently even seldom phone my mom. What made me hate myself was that I didn't know my mom was ill until one day I found she couldn't move by herself. If I were a child again, I wouldn't be such a naughty boy. No matter what would happen, I would stay with my mom and take good care of her.
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【分析】
这是一篇故事类读后续写作文
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知,续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:When speed failed her, she used her wisdom. 所以后文应该是举例说明作者母亲在追赶作者时,运用的一些智慧。这些例子应该有幽默感,引起读者的兴趣。第二段开头是:If given a chance, I would let my mom run in front of me.本段应该写发生在作者母亲身上的一些不幸的事情,作者为没有好好的照顾、陪伴母亲而后悔。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:After graduating from college, I went to Beijing to develop my business.现在分词短语作时间状语;What made me hate myself was that I didn't know my mom was ill until one day I found she couldn't move by herself.主语从句和表语从句的运用。
 
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