总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明主题
2.介绍相关情况
1）你喜欢的运动项目。（sports you like）
2）日常运动情况。（daily physical activities）
3) 你的运动体会。（what you have learned）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
share…with; would like; usually; practical; take part in; including; as well as; have great fun; In my opinion; not only…but also…; build up
第三步：连词成句
1. I’d like to share you with my sports story.
2. I usually play table tennis after school and I have learned many practical skills.
3. I also take part in other sports activities in our school,
4. including running, basketball as well as football.
5. I go cycling or climb the hill and I have great fun.
6. In my opinion, not only does the sports help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I like table tennis best, which is the most popular sports in China.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；部分倒装句In my opinion, not only does the sports help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends.也使用了一些固定词组，如share…with; take part in; not only…but also…等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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