书面表达（共两节，满分40分）
请你根据表格里的内容,用英语介绍乔布斯。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：旧金山San Francisco；企业家entrepreneur
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【范文】Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco, California, the USA on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011. He graduated from Homestead High School.
He was an inventor, entrepreneur and the former CEO of Apple Company, with iPod, iPhone, iPad and so on as his masterpieces. Jobs made a great contribution to the transformation of modern communication, entertainment and lifestyle. It was him who led the trend of global information technology and electronic products, enabling the once rare and expensive electronic products to become part of people’s lives in modern times.
Steve Jobs is always considered as a great example that I should follow, whose deeds encourage us to pursue our dream.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。
【详解】解题思路：根据表格信息，文章结构可以分为三个部分。第一部分写乔布斯的基本信息，比如出生时间地点等。第二部分写他的代表作品和主要成就。第三部分写个人对乔布斯的一个评价。写作过程注意题目提供的参考词汇。在给文章润色的过程中，可以使用一些特殊句式，复合句等。另外注意本文应该是以一般过去时展开叙述。
【点睛】本文语言流畅，信息完整。使用了一些高档词汇和短语，比如：masterpieces，made a great contribution to，modern communication，is always considered as等。还使用了强调句以非谓语动词高级句式及结构，为本文增添了不少色彩，如：“It was him who led the trend of global information technology and electronic products, enabling the once rare and expensive electronic products to become part of people’s lives in modern times.”
请你根据表格里的内容,用英语介绍乔布斯。
| 姓名 | Steve Jobs |
| 出生地 | 美国 加州 旧金山 |
| 出生日期 | 1955年2月24日 |
| 逝世日期 | 2011年10月5日 |
| 毕业院校 | Homestead High School |
| 职业 | 发明家，企业家，苹果前行政总裁 |
| 代表作品 | iPod, iPhone, iPad等 |
| 主要成就 | 1. 改变了现代通讯、娱乐乃至生活方式； 2. 引领全球资讯科技和电子产品的潮流，让曾经昂贵稀罕的电子产品成为现代人生活的一部分。 |
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：旧金山San Francisco；企业家entrepreneur
___________________________________________
【范文】Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco, California, the USA on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011. He graduated from Homestead High School.
He was an inventor, entrepreneur and the former CEO of Apple Company, with iPod, iPhone, iPad and so on as his masterpieces. Jobs made a great contribution to the transformation of modern communication, entertainment and lifestyle. It was him who led the trend of global information technology and electronic products, enabling the once rare and expensive electronic products to become part of people’s lives in modern times.
Steve Jobs is always considered as a great example that I should follow, whose deeds encourage us to pursue our dream.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。
【详解】解题思路：根据表格信息，文章结构可以分为三个部分。第一部分写乔布斯的基本信息，比如出生时间地点等。第二部分写他的代表作品和主要成就。第三部分写个人对乔布斯的一个评价。写作过程注意题目提供的参考词汇。在给文章润色的过程中，可以使用一些特殊句式，复合句等。另外注意本文应该是以一般过去时展开叙述。
【点睛】本文语言流畅，信息完整。使用了一些高档词汇和短语，比如：masterpieces，made a great contribution to，modern communication，is always considered as等。还使用了强调句以非谓语动词高级句式及结构，为本文增添了不少色彩，如：“It was him who led the trend of global information technology and electronic products, enabling the once rare and expensive electronic products to become part of people’s lives in modern times.”
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