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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 While driving, I sensed something wrong with my c

英语作文范文 08-13

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The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away. My heart sank as I watched him pull out of the parking lot and onto the street. Regretting bitterly, I set out on foot to find the nearest convenience store. I’d barely walked ten steps when the truck pulled back into the parking lot. The man got out and walked over to me. “I can’t leave you alone like this. I’ll take the flat to the tire shop and get it fixed for you.”
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Half an hour later, he was back. The tire store was closing just as I pulled in, “he said, coming over to my car.” I told them you were alone, and they agreed to stay and fix it for you.” “Thank you so much,” I said, watching as he replaced the wheel. “How much do I owe you? ” “It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. The hole was too big to repair.” Eighty-five dollars!That would put a serious burden on my budget. Yet I was grateful for all he’d done to help a stranger.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,作者独自在外车胎瘪了,几乎没有人,在天快黑时一个男人愿意帮助作者把车胎拆掉并且送他去轮胎店修理,这事作者想起来了父母和他说过不要和陌生人一起上车。
【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:那人耸耸肩,走到他的卡车前,开车走了……,所以应该写这个男人开车走后作者的心情,以及之后男人还会做出怎么样的举动,是否会返回。第二段的开头是:半小时后,他回来了……,所以应该写这个男人回来之后是如何帮助我以及帮助我获得什么样的报酬,并且作者表达对这个男人的感激。
续写时还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 非谓语动词作状语Regretting bitterly, I set out on foot to find the nearest convenience store. 省略that引导的定语从句Yet I was grateful for all he’d done to help a stranger.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
 
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